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Inspired by poetry: "Ploughing mountainsides" » English to French » Entry by Helene Carrasco-Nabih


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Translation by Helene Carrasco-Nabih (#29086)

The Beginning

All in a moment, years ago,
The boy I was became a man:
Suddenly my life began!
I saw the world before me— So
That ploughman by his horses stands
Sweating on the first hill's brow,
Having left the riverlands
Furrowed in the vale below,
And sees a mountainside to plough,
Barren rock to blunt his share,
Thunder hanging in the air,
And the black peak above him, bare,
Waiting now.
—Let him plough it if he dare!


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Rosalie Blythe
Rosalie Blythe
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the writing Aug 14, 2020

It's very economically written. .. beautiful language in fact....neat,concise...sweet words...adjectives are well chosen..it's dramtic!...some rhymes

 

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