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Networking event for Poetry & Literature translators

Aug 7, 2013

Group discussion

How close does one have to stick to the original text? "The nearest police station, that's him."

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Schedule:

This session ended at 16:50

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This discussion topic was suggested by ProZ.com member Edwin Miles:
How close does one have to stick to the original text? Is sentence level always appropriate, or is paragraph level enough? Can you leave out sentences entirely? How much leeway do/should you have? Is this decided in collaboration with the writer him/herself. etc.? The title above is a translation (by Ernst Kaiser/Eithne Wilkins) of "Er ist am nächsten daran," in Siegfried Lenz's "Deutschstunde" ("The German Lesson").

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Q1. Where are located today?
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A1. I am in Syracuse, NY USA

People who signed up for this focus group:

Alexandra Schneeuhr

Kipra

David Creuze

Francija

Bettina Myers

Last year I did a traineeship as a literary translator and translated two poems by the Ecuadorian poet Ramiro Oviedo. I managed to solve some translation problems about meaning and localization only in collaboration with him. How do you behave when you have to adjust a text from a culture to another?

Gabriele Monte

Itālija

Sandrine Guéant

Francija

Keen to see how others deal with these examples (and more).

Aïda Garcia Pons (X)

ASV

Rodica Stefan

Edwin Miles

Vācija

johnkar

Grieķija

I had lots of fights with my editor on this topic. ;)

Heléne van der Westhuizen

Vācija

Portugāle

Nīderlande

Irāna

ASV

Mariana S. Artieda Rico

Argentīna

How much leeway do you have in "improving a text," i.e. if you can express the idea in a more creative or interesting way than the author, is it alright to suggest it?

Arlene Lokomowitz

ASV

Brigitte Pellat (X)

Francija

Shobha Pawar

Huijiao Deng

Itālija

Really would like to share practice about he/she/it in translation practice Sp > Eng and Fr > Eng and general thoughts about literal versus more poetic translation.