Glossary entry

English term or phrase:

distract resources that should be aimed at the people

English answer:

divert resources...

Added to glossary by Yvonne Becker
Mar 20, 2006 01:27
18 yrs ago
English term

distract resources that should be aimed at the people

English Social Sciences Government / Politics
"Most Venezuelans oppose an arms race that would distract resources that should be aimed at the people, creating more poverty and misery for the country."

What the text is trying to say is that the government is investing in weapons, instead of aiming the resources to reduce poverty and most of Venezuelans disapprove this.
Change log

Mar 20, 2006 13:24: NancyLynn changed "Term asked" from "Does this sound ok?" to "distract resources that should be aimed at the people"

Responses

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English term (edited): does this sound ok?
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distract resources...

I think you want to say "divert resources away from the needs of the people, thus creating additional poverty and misery throughout the country."
Peer comment(s):

agree Raging Dreamer : Nice wording!
13 mins
agree David Elliff : definitely "divert" and not "distract"
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agree Trudy Peters : divert
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agree zaphod
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agree Michael Barnett
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agree Tsogt Gombosuren : "divert"
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agree Chiquipaisa : Yes, divert.
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agree William [Bill] Gray : This is a good suggestion, using the word "divert".
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agree tazdog (X)
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agree Angela Dickson (X)
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agree Jack Doughty
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agree Marie Scarano
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agree Alison Jenner
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agree Peter Shortall :
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agree Bailatjones
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agree NancyLynn : yes, and please change your glossary entry to "divert resources", so the KudoZ Open Glossary is helpful in future searches
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agree Can Altinbay : Yes, "divert" is much better. I'm not fond of "aim" here, either, so I like that you recast it the way you did. A+
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agree airmailrpl : divert
1 day 14 hrs
agree Alfa Trans (X)
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4 mins
English term (edited): distract resources that should be aimed at

because the country's resources should be used for improving people's lives

and not create more poverty and misery.
Peer comment(s):

agree William [Bill] Gray : This variant is certainly ossible, but I think Kay's "DIVERT" is a better choice of word in this case.
3 hrs
thanks, Bill :-)
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English term (edited): does this sound ok?

What about this?

An arms race would distract resources instead of aiming them at the people, thus creating more poverty and misery for the country; so most Venezuelans oppose such an arms race.
Peer comment(s):

agree William [Bill] Gray : This variant is also possible, and I really like the "aiming" when the text refers to the arms race, but I do think that Kay's "divert" is a better word than "distract".
3 hrs
Thanks for the remark
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English term (edited): does this sound ok?

It does, but...

To provide for better clarity, you could phrase it differently, perhaps breaking it up into two sentences. For example, "Most Venezuelans oppose an arms race that would distract resources which should be aimed at the people. Such activity would result in even more poverty and misery for the country."
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+1
11 mins
English term (edited): distract

detract (from)

?
Peer comment(s):

agree Raging Dreamer : oh much better word :D
7 mins
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6 hrs
English term (edited): does this sound ok?

add "Thus"

"Most Venezuelans oppose an arms race that would distract resources that should be aimed at the people, THUS creating more poverty and misery for the country."
Peer comment(s):

agree Bailatjones : yes, I think the sentence needs a thus or a therefore
3 hrs
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