Glossary entry (derived from question below)
English term or phrase:
In more detail the function of the Global Update selectors will be explained below with reference to 'Promo Overview' Chart.
English answer:
The function [operation?] of of the Global Update selectors is explained in more detail below with reference to the 'Promo Overv
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NancyLynn
Aug 31, 2006 15:22
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In more detail the function of the Global Update selectors will be explained below with reference to 'Promo Overview' Chart.
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I am not sure if any commas are necessary in the sentence below. Please advise !
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In more detail the function of the Global Update selectors will be explained below with reference to 'Promo Overview' Chart.
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In more detail the function of the Global Update selectors will be explained below with reference to 'Promo Overview' Chart.
Change log
Aug 31, 2006 15:27: NancyLynn changed "Term asked" from "commas " to "In more detail the function of the Global Update selectors will be explained below with reference to \'Promo Overview\' Chart."
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English term (edited):
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If you keep the present sentence structure (which I do not recommend), then:
In more detail, the function of the Global Update selectors is explained below with reference to the 'Promo Overview' Chart.
My recommendation would be:
The function [operation?] of of the Global Update selectors is explained in more detail below with reference to the 'Promo Overview' Chart.
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naja -- options
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re function vs. operation: the function of the something is what it does, while its operation is how it does it.
In more detail, the function of the Global Update selectors is explained below with reference to the 'Promo Overview' Chart.
My recommendation would be:
The function [operation?] of of the Global Update selectors is explained in more detail below with reference to the 'Promo Overview' Chart.
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Note added at 6 mins (2006-08-31 15:28:27 GMT)
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naja -- options
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re function vs. operation: the function of the something is what it does, while its operation is how it does it.
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Comment: "many thanks to everybody !"
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English term (edited):
commas
The function of the Global Update selectors with reference to 'Promo Overview' Chart will be explain
The function of the Global Update selectors with reference to 'Promo Overview' Chart will be explained in greater detail below.
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RHELLER
: :-) no commas needed in your well-organized sentence
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thanks Rita :-)
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Jack Doughty
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thanks Jack
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Can Altinbay
: I'd write "is explained" (or even better, convert to active voice) - otherwise, nice recast.
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yes, yes, absolutely right, is explained, thanks!
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Marie-Hélène Hayles
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medicine - chemistry - pharmaceuticals
Native in: English
Works in: Italian to English, English
English term (edited):
commas
The function of the Global Update selectors will be explained below in more detail,
The function of the Global Update selectors will be explained below in more detail, with reference to the "Promo Overview" chart.
I'd change the word order a bit as above, but even if you don't, you need a comma after "in more detail".
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"need" is perhaps too strong... although I'd use one.
I'd change the word order a bit as above, but even if you don't, you need a comma after "in more detail".
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"need" is perhaps too strong... although I'd use one.
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R. Alex Jenkins
: agree; see the full sentence in Marie-Helene's explanation box below
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